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    Help me

    Hello everyone. I want to change my job. I need to write a memo to your supervisor.

    I use translate.google and concerned about his quality of translation.
    Help please correct my text


    Dear ХХХХ

    I would like to discuss with you my future. I work in a team, ХХХХ, I really like our team.
    But, unfortunately, I have a dollar's mortgage loan, I am experiencing great difficulties and is forced to seek higher wages.
    I was offered another job, but I am sorry to leave you.
    Maybe you and I could find a compromise? I would like to go to the CSD, or take the post of Chief Electrical Specialist.
    I'm 36 years old. I have a thirteen-year experience designing large projects and field supervision, as well as experience in the expertise.
    I unfortunately bad know English, it's my only problem.
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    I'm not sure what you mean by 'the expertise'. I've put the rest of it into what I think sounds like a more formal memo. Ftr I would reconsider admitting that your English is poor. It's okay and no doubt they would interview you for the position anyway, so they can make their mind up about that for themselves.

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    Dear XXXX,

    I would like to discuss my future with you. I currently work in in a team, XXXX, which is a position I enjoy. However, I am currently experiencing great difficulties with my outgoings, such as my mortgage. I have found it necessary to seek higher wages.

    I have been offered another job, but would be sorry to leave you. If it is possible to compromise on this issue, I would like to go to the CSD or take the post of Chief Electrical Specialist. I'm 36 years old, and have thirteen year's experience designing large projects and field supervision, 'as well as experience in the expertise'.

    Unfortunately, my English can be poor, but this would be my only problem.
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    Dear XXXX

    I need a dollar, a dollar is what I need.
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    Lol furball

    I think he means industry when he says expertise.


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    Include a bit about Nigerian business partners/bank accounts.

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    Howe_zat

    thank you very much

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    i would include something about the eu sanctions causing you financial hardship
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    Quote Originally Posted by uvelocity View Post
    i would include something about the eu sanctions causing you financial hardship
    this is not true



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