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    My crazy passage

    I just wrote this as i was in a writing mood...

    She knew what she wanted. And why. Just not exactly how. She had an idea how but it was all a muddle in her brain. And all anyone would want to know is how. They would ask her what she was going to do. She'd say what, but they meant how. She'd cringe as she knew she would have to somehow have to make the muddle in her brain sound convincing. She'd use big words to try and confuse people and make it seem like she knew. But she didnt know. And she didn't need to know, she'd get what she wanted. Everything would fall into place, there wasn't a need for her to know. It was everyone else that needed to know. So they could judge. Or maybe it wasn't that they wanted to judge, she just thought they did because she knew she would judge if they knew she didn't know how. Her deepest fear was that people may stop her from getting what she wanted because she didn't know how. Or was her deepest fear that she may never figure out how...

    feel free to be confused.... or maybe even completely understand
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    Re: My crazy passage

    Originally posted by Kimbo
    I just wrote this as i was in a writing mood...

    She knew what she wanted. And why. Just not exactly how. She had an idea how but it was all a muddle in her brain. And all anyone would want to know is how. They would ask her what she was going to do. She'd say what, but they meant how. She'd cringe as she knew she would have to somehow have to make the muddle in her brain sound convincing. She'd use big words to try and confuse people and make it seem like she knew. But she didnt know. And she didn't need to know, she'd get what she wanted. Everything would fall into place, there wasn't a need for her to know. It was everyone else that needed to know. So they could judge. Or maybe it wasn't that they wanted to judge, she just thought they did because she knew she would judge if they knew she didn't know how. Her deepest fear was that people may stop her from getting what she wanted because she didn't know how. Or was her deepest fear that she may never figure out how...

    feel free to be confused.... or maybe even completely understand
    strangely enough i nderstood that :wow: . what exactly was it that she wanted but didn't know how to get and was fearing thet others would judge her on because of her not knowing how to obtain what it was that she wanted?
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    knowing me i've probably missed the whole point

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    The point isnt really what she wanted. I was writing about a feeling I have, but it wasn't a little plot about me, thats boring and I was much more interested in whether other people get that feeling. And my mate said she completely understood, and you get it... so I guess thats what its about...


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    Need I bring up the word 'Psychiatrist' yet again?

    that being said i get it too......(kinda)


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    Need I bring up the word 'Psychiatrist' yet again?

    that being said i get it too......(kinda)


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    No need. I know. I'm nuts... but you get it...

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    I think once socrates (the philosopher not the soccer player) told someone:

    "I know more than you. Atleast I know that I dont know anything, you dont even know that."

    So Kim, I guess you actually do know more than most people.

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    according to socrates.

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    Originally posted by Kimbo
    I know. I'm nuts...

    yep, thats right :P
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    I get it which is well impressive because I have Fresher's flu and a head heavier than John Prescott's ass.

    Think it must be a teenage reflective thing which doesn't really have a mood but has meaning.
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    Inspired by the Lyrics thread and Kim's passage which I really enjoyed, I've decided to put up some stuff I wrote a while ago, additions to "Poetry Corner" as I write lyrics and stuff, although I try and keep away from typical pretentious stuff, anyway sorry if they sound like angst filled "oh no not this teenage crap again" stuff, I just thought I'd put it up if anyone wanted to read it.


    Convo

    Sitting down writing, what shall I write about?
    Done frustration, done depression, I know, happyness.
    Oh yes, easier said than done, what should I say?
    Should I write about how I do things right and get told off?
    Or about how Monday was a complete wash off? Supposed to go out, have fun,
    climb hills, and instead we go to the wrong place, then go to someone's for a picnic,
    then it rains and we all go back to the flat, oh great, yeah!
    Or how I'm friends with someone I cannot get out of my thoughts? That's the worst.

    "Life's a bitch they say"
    Yeah it sure is,
    But surely something should go my way, just this once.
    But will it? I doubt it, it never does. That's life, it's a bitch.
    But what am I worrying about? I'm friends with the person in question.
    "Surely that's better than nothing?"
    Well in theory yes. In reality no. Or maybe yes, I don't know.
    Man, I fancy her to boot, it makes it harder, surely you should know!
    "She likes you"
    Oh yes, but how? Who knows, but her, yup, girls, oh well.
    I've not known her long, true, but the time spent feels like forever.
    "Your mates, you talk a lot, you get on well, what more could you want?"
    Silly question. Have you ever been through this before? Doubt it.
    "Don't rush it"
    Hahaha, good one mate, easier said than done.
    "If it's ment to be it will happen"
    Yeah but when will I know?
    "She likes the stuff you like"
    Yeah great, thanks mate, bet you think you've just made everything better, oh yes,
    remind me of why everything is so hard to deal with at the moment and,
    BANG! Suddenly it's all better? You wish.
    "There are many more fish in the sea"
    True, but I don't want another.


    Drifting Off

    Nothing to do, so I drift off as I always do,
    Into this world of dreams, always with you,

    Lost in thought, lost in thought, lost in thought.

    Why do I think so much? It frustrates me, ENOUGH!
    I'm tired of this indecision, I'm never sure,
    Not just about you, there's always more,
    I'm so unsure, friends is fine but everyone wants more.

    Lost in thought, lost in thought, lost in thought.

    I often loose myself in the clouds of my mind,
    But lately those clouds have become hills I've had to climb,
    Oh you like climbing don't you, so do I, we've been over this before.

    I've been over this before.
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    Originally posted by Kimbo
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    Damn you giving it away :P

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    Originally posted by Rik
    "There are many more fish in the sea"
    True, but I don't want another.
    Very deep....

    No seriously thats pretty good
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