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    Steven Smith Poem

    This one is for swingpanzee


    Both His style and look are great
    He's legend of game, how good is Smith
    Even selectors who had him took are great
    He's to enjoy much fame, how good is Smith

    Jealous is every mate of Smith
    cuz fans only wait of Smith
    and clubs do greater rate of Smith

    by dancing down, what an attack he does
    absolute performance with bat he does
    goodness of game is that he does

    Lets Recall the ashes that recently took place
    or Smith's smashes that recently took place
    To Be continued...... (this one I'm more motivated to complete)


    Edit:Never misunderstand me I'm only 14.........
    Last edited by Dawood Ahmad; 21-01-2015 at 12:35 PM.

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    There's a very thin line between original and entertaining on the one hand and repetitive and boring on the other

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    I couldn't do this one very well because I am very busy. My exams are starting soon so those who want me to write more poems please wait till 19th March and then tell me.

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    End every paper with a poem on Sharif's fame and Imran's game

    Absolute performance you will set
    great fame you will get
    men in awe of your might
    women love you all night
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    Quote Originally Posted by harsh.ag View Post
    End every paper with a poem on Sharif's fame and Imran's game
    You missed Qadri & please let me understand are most people here from South Asia?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Dawood Ahmad View Post
    I couldn't do this one very well because I am very busy. My exams are starting soon so those who want me to write more poems please wait till 19th March and then tell me.
    Booked it in my diary mate.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Dawood Ahmad View Post
    You missed Qadri & please let me understand are most people here from South Asia?
    What is South Asia really? When you invert the globe, Russia is South Asia. For what it's worth, most people here are not from there.

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    Quite a tribute to Graeme Smith there, Dawood.
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    Quote Originally Posted by fredfertang View Post
    There's a very thin line between original and entertaining on the one hand and repetitive and boring on the other
    There's a very thin line between critic and good feedback-giver on the one hand and a jealous fool who hates abilities on the other
    Dawood I will wait for your exams to end. Heck i probably have an exam on 19th March but I will skip it to read your grand piece
    Last edited by Swingpanzee; 21-01-2015 at 06:57 PM.
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    I'm getting a kick out of reading them as if the cricketer themselves were delivering them battle rap-style in the third person.
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    poem sub forum when

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    Quote Originally Posted by kiwiviktor81 View Post
    I'm getting a kick out of reading them as if the cricketer themselves were delivering them battle rap-style in the third person.
    This is how I read them too

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    Great effort, and props for posting it online.

    Not sure if this poem thing is some inside joke but . . . are they supposed to make sense?
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    I always knew the new world order under AB would be good,
    All hail the great poet the one and only Dawood
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    Quote Originally Posted by TheJediBrah View Post
    are they supposed to make sense?
    The Ponting one makes sense to me

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