Strong upper body and the feet are in a good position for generating pace (very good, IMO). There is a problem with how the feet get into position.
The only 2 things I would ask you to work on are the little hop to the side that stalls your momentum when hitting the crease and driving yourself through the crease towards the batsman. The left leg drifts to the offside in your action and this forces you to pivot as it is hard to get the required hip rotation. By taking the left leg towards the batsman you would strengthen your action.
The biggest issues are that accuracy and pace are lost when the body jerks and doesnt go in a straight line.
An honest assesment would be that it is an action full of potential but a little unrefined. Attack the crease directly withouth the jump to the side and drive into and though the action towards the batsman. Balance, pace and accuracy will improve.
Very promising
